From c9e96ead93b2f6fb12d44ac3def136ae2bffc54b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Yun Date: Wed, 4 Jul 2018 08:29:18 -0700 Subject: (doc) syntactic fixes (#764) FAQ.md - "the name" -> "a name" - "re install" -> "reinstall" - Changed the sentence structure to accomodate the flow of "objective -> method to achieve the objective -> reason why the objective is desired", rather than "how we are going to do it -> what we are trying to do -> why it is important" README.md - "It's the reason" -> "That is why" - "in it" -> "on it" - "This program is free software" -> "This is a free software": reduce redundancy (program and software), and introduce a proper article - "redistribute it and/or modify it" -> "redistribute and/or modify it" --- README.md | 9 ++++----- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) (limited to 'README.md') diff --git a/README.md b/README.md index 22ee22701..a5d9cd6bd 100644 --- a/README.md +++ b/README.md @@ -90,8 +90,8 @@ enough money to pay for bandwidth and video storage of its servers. So we need to have a decentralized network of servers seeding videos (as [Diaspora](https://github.com/diaspora/diaspora) for example). But it's not -enough because one video could become famous and overload the server. It's the -reason why we need to use a P2P protocol to limit the server load. Thanks to +enough because one video could become famous and overload the server. That is +why we need to use a P2P protocol to limit the server load. Thanks to [WebTorrent](https://github.com/feross/webtorrent), we can make P2P (thus BitTorrent) inside the web browser, as of today. @@ -156,7 +156,7 @@ See [ARCHITECTURE.md](/ARCHITECTURE.md) for a more detailed explanation. torrent URI of this specific video is...). * If a user uploads a video, the server seeds it and sends its followers some metadata (name, short description, torrent URI...). - * A server is a tracker responsible for all the videos uploaded in it. + * A server is a tracker responsible for all the videos uploaded on it. * Even if nobody watches a video, it is seeded by the server (through [WebSeed protocol](http://www.bittorrent.org/beps/bep_0019.html)) where the video was uploaded. @@ -179,8 +179,7 @@ Copyright (C) 2018 PeerTube Contributors This program is free software: you can redistribute it and/or modify it under the terms of the GNU Affero General Public License as published -by the Free Software Foundation, either version 3 of the License, or -(at your option) any later version. +by the Free Software Foundation, either version 3 of the License, or (at your option) any later version. This program is distributed in the hope that it will be useful, but WITHOUT ANY WARRANTY; without even the implied warranty of -- cgit v1.2.3