From e5203ffa1260ee03f0f84ef6b65d57ccad5ee695 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Thomas Citharel <tcit@tcit.fr>
Date: Tue, 23 Jan 2018 08:53:15 +0100
Subject: Improve docs (#232)

Signed-off-by: Thomas Citharel <tcit@tcit.fr>
---
 support/doc/dependencies.md |  8 ++++----
 support/doc/production.md   | 24 ++++++++++++++++++------
 2 files changed, 22 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)

diff --git a/support/doc/dependencies.md b/support/doc/dependencies.md
index 2f2d4f49d..c950b357f 100644
--- a/support/doc/dependencies.md
+++ b/support/doc/dependencies.md
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 # Dependencies
 
-## Debian / Ubuntu
+## Debian / Ubuntu and derivatives
 
   1. Install NodeJS 8.x (current LTS):
      [https://nodejs.org/en/download/package-manager/#debian-and-ubuntu-based-linux-distributions](https://nodejs.org/en/download/package-manager/#debian-and-ubuntu-based-linux-distributions)
@@ -9,8 +9,8 @@
   4. Run:
 
 ```
-$ apt-get update
-$ apt-get install nginx ffmpeg postgresql openssl g++ make
+$ sudo apt update
+$ sudo apt install nginx ffmpeg postgresql openssl g++ make
 ```
 
 ## Arch Linux
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ $ apt-get install nginx ffmpeg postgresql openssl g++ make
   1. Run:
 
 ```
-$ pacman -S nodejs yarn ffmpeg postgresql openssl
+$ sudo pacman -S nodejs yarn ffmpeg postgresql openssl
 ```
 
 ## Other distributions
diff --git a/support/doc/production.md b/support/doc/production.md
index 49569dad4..ee8bf2647 100644
--- a/support/doc/production.md
+++ b/support/doc/production.md
@@ -12,12 +12,16 @@ Create a `peertube` user with `/home/peertube` home:
 
 ```
 $ sudo useradd -m -d /home/peertube -s /bin/bash -p peertube peertube
+```
+
+Set its password:
+```
 $ sudo passwd peertube
 ```
 
 ### Database
 
-Create production database and peertube user:
+Create the production database and a peertube user inside PostgreSQL:
 
 ```
 $ sudo -u postgres createuser -P peertube
@@ -26,13 +30,21 @@ $ sudo -u postgres createdb -O peertube peertube_prod
 
 ### Prepare PeerTube directory
 
+Fetch the latest tagged version of Peertube
+```
+$ VERSION=$(curl -s https://api.github.com/repos/chocobozzz/peertube/releases/latest | grep tag_name | cut -d '"' -f 4) && echo "Latest Peertube version is $VERSION"
+```
+Open the peertube directory, create a few required directories
+```
+    cd /home/peertube && sudo -u peertube mkdir config storage versions && cd versions
+```
+Download the latest version of the Peertube client, unzip it and remove the zip
 ```
-$ VERSION=$(curl -s https://api.github.com/repos/chocobozzz/peertube/releases/latest | grep tag_name | cut -d '"' -f 4) && \
-    cd /home/peertube && \
-    sudo -u peertube mkdir config storage versions && \
-    cd versions && \
     sudo -u peertube wget -q "https://github.com/Chocobozzz/PeerTube/releases/download/${VERSION}/peertube-${VERSION}.zip" && \
-    sudo -u peertube unzip peertube-${VERSION}.zip && sudo -u peertube rm peertube-${VERSION}.zip && \
+    sudo -u peertube unzip peertube-${VERSION}.zip && sudo -u peertube rm peertube-${VERSION}.zip
+```
+Install Peertube
+```
     cd ../ && sudo -u peertube ln -s versions/peertube-${VERSION} ./peertube-latest && \
     cd ./peertube-latest && sudo -u peertube yarn install --production --pure-lockfile
 ```
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